PHOTOGRAPH 1

This picture has it's advantages and disadvantages.
Advantages : - Jenny is looking straight into the camera.
                    - Her dark top stands out from the grey lockers.
                
Disadvantages: - Jenny is connecting with the audience through her eyes, but her facial expression is not as powerful, her smile should have being bigger to show that she enjoys college.
                       - The angle of the camera does not look completely head on because the lockers in the back ground are not straight.
                     - her pose appears to make her look not ready and uncomfortable.  
                     - The flash wasn't on